Remember back in November when 
we did the free query critique thing? This morning, awesome news was in my in-box!
Just wanted to send you a quick thank you. I sent out my first batch of queries this month with the query you critiqued. So far, I’ve gotten 3 full requests and 1 partial. I’ve still got quite a few outstanding queries, but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciated your assistance.
– AUTHOR
Prior to the query critique this author felt they were struggling. The original query wasn’t getting much traction. With the new query… four sent queries, four page requests. I really loved the query and the premise of the book, and I’m hoping the author will email me soon to say they’ve signed with an agent!
I don’t have any more critique-giveaways planned at the moment (but I probably will later this year) you can always book a Query Packet Critique if you want me to help you with your query, first five pages, and synopsis.