Change Of Momentum News!

In case you were curious how much gets cut or rewritten from a novel…
 
… my Cut Scene file for #ChangeOfMomentum is at 10k right now. The final novel will probably be 90k.
 
The cut scenes are things I rewrote from a different POV, parts of scenes that slowed the pacing, scenes that didn’t fit the tone of the final edit, or other scenes that just didn’t work anymore.
 
Sometimes I’ll rewrite scenes from multiple POVs to see whose POV I like it from best. These scenes will go up on Patreon as bonuses around the release date of the book.
The book is scheduled for release in November (POLAR TERROR is coming out in October), and I’m currently working on the content edits for CHANGE.
Want a little teaser of the cut scenes now?
Here’s Rowena Lee and Hollis Silar mixing it up at Cargo Blue…

Hollis cut across the dance floor, pushing people aside as he brought his battle shield up. If they wanted to play, he’d leave a smoking ruin where their playground had been.

 

“Upset, Silar?” Kesko taunted him. “Hurts to see someone you love cry, doesn’t it? Should have remembered that when you killed my cousin. You lit his fighter up. It took days for him to die of the burns.”

 

“We’re at peace, Lee. Knock it off.” Another wave of mental attacks bombarded his shield, pounding at him, and then there was a sudden cessation.

All eyes turned to Hollis’s left.

 

He glanced over and saw Rowena.

 

She crossed her arms and glared down her crew. “What are you doing?”

 

“Having fun,” Kesko said, it was a challenge.

 

“Without me?”

 

Hollis watched her turn. Rowena’s shields were up and she was ready for a fight. He scowled at her.

 

“Wanna play, Silar? I know you could wrap them in knots, but do you really think you can take me?”

 

“Any day of the week.”

 

She smirked. “You wish.” There was a push on his shields, a hit from telekyen that pushed him backwards. The opening volley in war.

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